The weirdest Vacation Ever!

One sunny and boiling afternoon , Rose was given a tour to a humungous castle that looked like a big shiny crown. Rose was given a tour from a tourist. The castle is tall as a giant tree house
“ Look at that !’’ she talked to herself, Rose had brown hair like burnt grass and blue shiny eyes , “ the castle is so big ’’
[Psalma and Amy]
The next day Rose saw Angel. Rose was Angels best friend Rose told Angel “I saw a humungous bear in the wide open river!”
Angel said “who cares about the humungous bear lets go with your Mum to the castle”  Replied Angel  
“No she was really hungry so she said that she wanted to eat a hot hot dog” Rose said  
[Susie and Yidi]
The next day they went to the largest and most popular zoo they saw exactly the same bear Rose saw. Angel had dark black hair like dark black paint and green eyes like green fresh grass.
Suddenly Angel and Rose screamed to death that they started running so fast like they were cheetahs and never visited that part of the zoo because they were scared of the hairy bears. After that they went to the zoo Rose and Angel went somewhere else called the Harbor bridge which was a popular bridge, at the bridge  they saw this bungee jump and then they asked if they could try it out. After that they were bungee jumping when they were bungee jumping they started screaming like a deaf owl all the way down to the floor then it just started to echo.
( Joanne & Ashley )
Then Rose and Angel ran away from the Harbor bridge. On the next day they went to the Museum in the museum they saw a dinosaur’s bone. Then they thought it was real so they ran away from the Museum. Rose told Angel “I don’t want to go anywhere because we will just be scared again so lets just stay at the castle” So they went back to the castle and played chess. “What a day” Rose and Angel said happily
(Daeman and Raj)