The weirdest Vacation Ever

One day a family of 4 lived in a little house on Sideway ST, The street was a very curvy street and their house had 3 bedrooms and was grey. A girl called Melissa lived with her mum, dad and her brother. Melissa had dark brown hair and her eyes were as blue as the sea. Her brother is called Slamagoth who also has dark brown hair but had brown eyes and was much taller then his sister. “I just had a great idea, lets go on a vacation to the Amazing Fair and we can stay at the 5 Star hotel” Slamagoth screamed over the top of his mum and dad’s voice’s. “This is gonna be the best vacation ever!” exclaimed Slamagoth.
“I think that’s a great idea!” said Melissa.
The next day they arrived at the Amazing Fair. When they got there the first thing they saw was an upside down fountain. “That is so weird...” Thought Slamagoth. Melissa was filming and she turned the camera upside down because her friends might not believe her when they saw the upside down fountain.
“WOW! The Amazing Fair has a spooky and haunted house, extreme roller coster, a pirated mini golf and a Big and fantastic Castle!” Shouted Melissa. When they went to the roller coster, no one was screaming. ( Jesse & Steven )

After they saw a extreme roller coster they went to the spooky haunted house no one got frightened! “That’s really creepy ...’’ Thought Melissa .  After they saw that they  rushed off to a resort where they played pirated mini golf but ... when they started to play... the holes went down and the balls started to bounce high! “That’s weird!’’ said mum.  
( Psalma and Amy )

Then Mum said “lets go to the big and fantastic Castle”
Melissa went inside the castle and she saw Rose and Faith, she was so glad! Rose and Faith were Melissa’s friends. Melissa went to Faith and Rose but they forgot who Melissa was so she just walked away slowly back to her Mum and she said “lets go to the wavy river” Melissa was really excited to go to the wavy river.
( Susie and Yidi )

They had such a great time that they decided to take a little rest at the really cool 5 Star Hotel for 2 nights. Melissa said “ this 5 star hotel is really fancy.”
 At the 5 Star hotel they had a wonderful view of the Amazing Fair and a lot of waiters it had almost seemed it had every thin. Melissa was so so tired that she just asked if there was a spa for children, the guy that she asked said “that there was over on the left” The family decided to stay to at the 5 star hotel for 1 week  now because they thought it was magnificent but when they went in their room they had a problem they had to stay in a room with cockroaches crawling all over the floor and Melissa and her brother said at the same time “Oh my gosh! this is the worst vacation ever!!!!” Melissa’s parents thought that they were having fun. Melissa’s mum said “ Just because there’s a little problem we shouldn’t let it get in our way.
( Joanne & Ashley )