The Bear

One time, next to a big splashing blueish waterfall, there was a girl named Angel... Angel went to the waterfall for a vacation--> “Ah! There’s a big brown grizzly bear in the river!” Screamed Angel.
Angel ran to her Mum and cried, “Mum, I saw a bear in the river when I was swimming!” Then Mum said “Don’t be silly, there’s no bear” Then Angel went out to play again. (by Susie and Yidi)

Then Angel realized that her mum was actually fighting  the GRIZZLY BEAR like a karate person. Then they both started running as fast as their legs could go. Then they saw that some thing was swopping down at them like a rocket launcher about to hit them. They froze like ice in the North Pole. An hour, later they went to a restaurant and had some very nice pizza. It was as hot as fire. Then they quickly ran out of the restaurant and jumped into a waterfall.
( joanne and Ashley)

Whoosh! A plane came out of the water fall and then soldiers came out of the plane. Then Angel shouted excitedly, “WOW”!!!! (RAJ and DAE-MAN)

Angel shouted to a soldier, “help! Soldier come and help me go to my very nice home, please!”
 So the soldier came and helped Angel to go  home.
When Angel got home, she called it the weirdest vacation ever...
(Alvin Mike Abdi)